"A great story plot; I really enjoyed this manuscript! He has a terrific writing style. I can tell that he has done much planning and preparation in crafting this work - especially the way he has thought out the characters and movement that happens in the story. This is not an easy feat. His prose are very nicely written with details that capture the reader. Right from the start the plot was very engaging and I found myself really connected with what was going on. It is easy to have too much going on too soon - not in your case. The plot is slow and methodical and he used the dialogue to move the plot along. With that being said, he really did a nice job of slowly making his way through the story with details and a certain voice (his as the author) that allows the reader to really interact with the characters (who are all round and very nicely developed). The characters are lifelike and I love it when I leave a story feeling like I know them. It has a realistic plot and to me that makes for an enjoyable story". Sincerely, Rae M., Manuscript Review Specialist